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Began life as a seed, potentially beautiful.
Began to bud, potentially perfect, untouched, pure.
Became a rose, a red rose...didn't really get the chance to grow.
Pure perfection picked in its prime.
too young, wrong time, didn't get the chance to shine.

Beauty fading, red to grey, they all see it, they just don't say...
passions gone; pain in its place, this grey rose stares death in the face,
falls to pieces, petals dropping, wishing time could be turned back,
greyness fades to black.
Pile of petals on the floor, this beautiful rose can be..no more.
:icongluttonforpunishment:

Author's Comments

It's just a poem I wrote in drama when I should've been doing...well, i'm not even sure. I never listen in class. Maybe that's why I don't know anything...about, well ANYTHING, lol.

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:iconlilsmilyangel:
WOW! me loves this!! tis beautiful, in sad way.
but u really should be concentrating :p. But i tend to write stuff in lessons, so im not one to comment.
Take care, xox

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:iconkim13:
allot like people in a metphor sort of way, i like it!

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:teddy: <------ Awwww Cute
:icongluttonforpunishment:
Yeah, it was about me really, not about the flower. It was just a load of random thoughts thrown together. xx
:iconkim13:
Great poem!

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:teddy: <------ Awwww Cute
:iconinvisigoth100:
Wow. This is so beautiful hun. :hug: You have such a way with words.

:blackrose:
Love u
xxx

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:iconmissy39811:
Its excellent, it is a beautiful poem.

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~Emotional-Writings
:iconmr-los-philos:
that is a pretty poem, i like the metaphorical use

nice one! :thumbsup:

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